I liked the scene and loved the auction. However you had a lot of repetition in your story that was completely unnecessary and it bogged down the reading for me.
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Anonymous01/24/16
Just Sayin
I know Melinda said she was not into pain, but it's been my experience that women who like their nipples pinched usually like their ass slapped. Nothing hardcore, just a few nice smacks near the moment of orgasm.
Consider adding consent to rough sex into agency interview so consent is clarified before the ass pounding and choking. Another option is to reference ALL the kinds of sex M is into and what she learned during her extensive training. I enjoyed how you built the tension and that you avoided calling the sexually active women sluts, whores, bitches, or cunts. Thanks for exploring writing.
To the person that said it can't happen in real life. Opps, it sure can and does. A fun story to read. A bit bulky, but otherwise, quite well done. In an auction, limits are usually stated before the purchase if they are not already known. The double checking was to make the slave comfy, and remind her she would not be hurt. This one is a five for the opportunity to relive memories. I'll check for others. Thanks
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Anonymous10/23/16
BDSM
very elongated tale I ,m not into BDSM but I read it out of interest, I didn't get why she found it necessary to say she was single when it was the occasion of her wedding aniversary to me I would not thought it would matter re the event..
English
As always
A fine story ! I've read them all. Keep on writing !
Interestingly Different
Unfortunate that this cannot happen in real life and is only a fantasy.
Good but repetitive in places.
I liked the scene and loved the auction. However you had a lot of repetition in your story that was completely unnecessary and it bogged down the reading for me.
Just Sayin
I know Melinda said she was not into pain, but it's been my experience that women who like their nipples pinched usually like their ass slapped. Nothing hardcore, just a few nice smacks near the moment of orgasm.
When concent occurs
Consider adding consent to rough sex into agency interview so consent is clarified before the ass pounding and choking. Another option is to reference ALL the kinds of sex M is into and what she learned during her extensive training. I enjoyed how you built the tension and that you avoided calling the sexually active women sluts, whores, bitches, or cunts. Thanks for exploring writing.
Oh yes it can
To the person that said it can't happen in real life. Opps, it sure can and does. A fun story to read. A bit bulky, but otherwise, quite well done. In an auction, limits are usually stated before the purchase if they are not already known. The double checking was to make the slave comfy, and remind her she would not be hurt. This one is a five for the opportunity to relive memories. I'll check for others. Thanks
BDSM
very elongated tale I ,m not into BDSM but I read it out of interest, I didn't get why she found it necessary to say she was single when it was the occasion of her wedding aniversary to me I would not thought it would matter re the event..
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