This may be fictional, but it truly brings back my memories of the girl I fell in Love with in my youth. But alas never got back together the way your Lovers have.
Anyway this is a great story, looking forward to additional chapters.
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Anonymous03/10/04
Loved it
I loved your stories. I think you have the ability to be a great writer and hopefully published. Hope to see your books at Barnes and Noble.
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Anonymous03/15/04
Loved it!
Your work is really amazing, the amount of romance and lust is perfectly balanced, I would absolutely LOVE to read more about Rae and Myles. I will check back periodically for your wonderful work!
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Anonymous08/27/04
Great, but...
You are a great writer, nice balance of romance, lust, and plot, but the sex seems a little rushed...slow it down!
i loved this story. soooo hot!!! u make me wanna believe in love at first sight. hehehehe. :) do write some more.... and finish some of your stories too.. :)
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Great
Just Great
Brings back my memories
This may be fictional, but it truly brings back my memories of the girl I fell in Love with in my youth. But alas never got back together the way your Lovers have.
Anyway this is a great story, looking forward to additional chapters.
Loved it
I loved your stories. I think you have the ability to be a great writer and hopefully published. Hope to see your books at Barnes and Noble.
Loved it!
Your work is really amazing, the amount of romance and lust is perfectly balanced, I would absolutely LOVE to read more about Rae and Myles. I will check back periodically for your wonderful work!
Great, but...
You are a great writer, nice balance of romance, lust, and plot, but the sex seems a little rushed...slow it down!
whoa!!!
i loved this story. soooo hot!!! u make me wanna believe in love at first sight. hehehehe. :) do write some more.... and finish some of your stories too.. :)
UMMMMMMMM
Now that is what I call go and get them! Good to the last word that you penned, I just wish for more on them???
Just started reading your stories. They are great and I cannot wait to finish them.
great stuff
Love your work.
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