Face to face

Excellent Story!

Great short story. Hubby is about to be attacked!

I loved it!

Very sexy. A combination of the possible forever and love with heated sex. You can't go wrong with that combo. Keep writing.

You are talented!

You are talented in writing you know that. I gave you an excellent score because you followed through nicely. As always it is difficult to pick apart your work. Some improvement could always be made in every story. The story was gentle, sexy, fun, and very beautiful.

Most important it could have happened!

Joyously overcome

This felt very real -- the characters' apprehensions are just as serious and as joyously overcome as in life. The story is truly romantic in how it sees this special time in the characters' lives.

A great story, well written

This is a great story, and you write very well, describing the what and where. But who are these two people? How did they get to where the story begins?

Keep writing!

Very nice!

A very sweet, romantic, but sexy-as-hell love story!

Really sexy

Great story! Sexy and sweet ~

*Honey

Hot, sweet…

and romantic.

I loved how you made Elvi so torn, slowly becoming more sure of herself.

Well done!

a definite "yes"

I liked this one. When I send my list (1st one, anyway) to Imp for the Anth., this one will be on it.

Q_C

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Loved it!

Great Story!

Great story!!! Hope you will write more in the future.

Like it? I LOVE it

Well written. You're very good at potraying the emotions of the characters. Good work!

good writing but the story was a bit short. wish to see even beter works in future.