All Comments on 'Valentine's Interrupted'

fucking pussy

Ugh. That's all that needs to be said.

Sorry, generally I can go for hotwife /cuckold stories in a big way. The sex was definitely hot but leading up to it and the aftermath took me right out of it.

Trash

...getting old pretty fast. It seems authors these days write just to piss off the cuck-haters...

...they don´t write to "piss off cuck-haters"...They write these stories because it´s the only way left for themselves to get off, as ordinary sex seems to be off limits or impossible to get...

Author's write for their own enjoyment and anyone who cares to read, started well but allowing brad to get into the hot tub did not work for me and then it was down hill all the way to the end. A better crafted middle and ending is possible but well done to the writer for taking the time to write.

I would usually agree with both of you, but when you look at this author's other stories and consider how stupid and overdone this plot is, it's pretty easy to see what his purpose was here...

-100 if possible. Trash.

Fantasy? This is your fantasy?

remember dead wives, and brainless fucks, tell no lies.

Divorce the day after the party is the best ending possible, if no one dies first

tiring!! So I gave it a 5 to help it along. Good LW story about a wife who fucks other men. That's what LW is all about you dumb fucking fag annony!

for content and effort. Eat shit annoy!

Good story!! Love the LW in this one

to offset the asshole annony

And using name not like little cuck annony did when he emailed me. I don't need to have written a story on here to recognize cuck trash. If you have something to say, then say it here where everyone can read it. Or are you so insecure that you have to throw your hissy fits in private.

awesome start, strange middle and an aweful ending... i guess the category "loving" wives doesn't fit here. Omega Male status stories are kinda lame

Little cuck annony messaged me and called me a fag. Still doesn't have the spine to say anything in public. Boo hoo hoo. That's OK I turned off private feedback so I won't get any more emails from you. Bye crybaby.

1*********** Don't bother to read it.

Why won't they let us rate stories like this less than 1*.......

No husband would have allowed this to happen...but in some peoples mind,

there aren't any normal husbands left out there..

Sad isn't it....

Author should kill himself for writing such sick shit.

He must be a garbageman or a pimp. I would at least charge Brad enough each month to have a nice apartment (Where I would live by myself with all my girlfriends) and never let the bitch in my home again. And Brad needs to have his name on the birth certificate and pay child suooprt. By the way who is going to keep her company and pay her bills from now on. Not Dave if he has even one ball.

I would have shut brad down at first stage of clothing being rearranged. One of us would be down for the count. Then to add insult she cut him off from the honey pot. This all happened on his birthday and valentines day. This shows little love and respect. For a child to raised in this is demented. It's all about her self serving pleasure. If this is a birthday present skip it and just leave.

This story was written just to irritate the readers.

It is contest suicide.

Why in the hell can't they add a whiny, cuck section to this site. Bullshit.

We all laugh at your dumbass comments and your need to read these stories knowing they will make you upset! You're a fucking joke dear annony and Pappy!

I guess I am abnormal, but this would have turned into one of those double homicides you see on the murder porn channels. I'd definitely be in prison if this occurred.

unless you are really into demeaning cuck stories. If so, this is one of the best.

anon.1

At least consider adding some realistic behavior if you write about how humans act.

Another cuckhold piece of crap

Totally lame story. What began as an interesting story with good characters, descended into the garbage heap with a ridiculous protagonist with a whore of a wife (life long love relationsip - bullshit!)

WTF is wrong with you? How demented is that pea brain of yours to subject the rest of us to this utter,complete, dumpster fire of a story??? Seriously go get help your brain is fucked up!!!

He's pissed about what happening, and suddenly he's okay with it. At the very least his reaction is no real reaction, just existing in the marriage for no good reason. The only token resistance is the "against my wishes" statement, but that's all.

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Then there's his family. Does his sister hate him that much that she's culpable in cuckolding him?

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Even in a category notorious for dreck, this is really, really, bad

Thats the last of your stories I'll read. Wish you a happy life

the author must have come out of his mother's asshole, instead of her cunt

are all comedies! Laughed my ass off with this one! *

You've got to be one sick fuck to write shit like this. The three primary characters are completely flawed beyond belief. There's two minutes of my life I'll never get back !!

BDEarth

What a load of shit please do not ever EVER write again.

Why do cuck stories get so stupid and over the top endings

Was like a ruined orgasm. Very frustrating . The wrath of God would have been unleashed on Sam and Brad!

There's always a place for parody.

1* for the sister...A sister that does this to her brother deserves to die in pain...

I cannot believe people actually get hot with this kind of scrap.

Gee, whole lot of closeted cuckolds read this story and must have come hard considering how angry they are. You did good work then if that's the case, it's a porn site after all, not a forum for bitter, lonely old men and internet misogynists to rant about morality.

Five stars for actually writing a loving wives story, now of poor anons and guys like slirpuf there could just realized they're in the wrong section if this answers them this much.

Sorry, I didn't (don't) like the concept. I could see it coming. I'm not even a little put off by cuckoldry, but it really has to be agreed. From my perspective this was terribly forced, I don't like force. Xoxoxo Annette

NEVER attempt to read ANYTHING you write!

this one sucked. fuck that whore 1*

Be killed.closet fags posting their shit in l w

Wow that was so horrible hang yourself.

Well, that was eye opening. I got to see one sided love. The writing was good. But, as personal preference goes? I think I will read the comments to know what I am getting into. Not my type of story. I guess some people like this sort of thing, but I am not one. I can't vote though since my personal feelings would make me vote non objectively. Hope you choose another subject to write about because you are not a bad writer.

Sincerely

Payenbrant.

Beyond stupid...

A woman gets horny and throws her entire life away.. rarmons seriously, have you ever had sex?

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Be a fuckin' man. If that bitch won't climb on your meat rack, kick her worthless whore ass off your gravy train.

Seriously, what the fuck is wrong with people... these sick fucks need to be put away from the rest of the world.

You're sick in the head.

This was some seriously fuck up shit! Stop while your behind!

poor little frontSHIT can't help but flame and rant and preach and moralize and tell all the "closet-cucks" to come out. sad little prick. try to comment the stories, little patethic FLAMER! you are one step away from becoming another bonnie/vastie!

This story isn't much of a story. It's just an attempt to piss the btb crowd off. Not much sex either. 1*

These writers continue to post the same story over and over again. If you know you're going to get a low rating, what is the point. You're not furthering yourself as a writer or offering anything original to this site by posting the exact same story that numerous other writers have posted. This was absolute garbage with very little character development and cookie cutter cliches around every corner. 1* for this sad excuse for erotic fiction.

what happens to retrenched eunuchs.

Now I know, they come here and write stories

1*

And, you call this a story.... What a waste..

Really really bad.

Sam never loved her husband. To do with Brad what she did shows a huge lack of respect for her husband. The part about Sam going off with Brad and Amy during their honeymoon was totally unbelievable. Amy didn't act like the sharing kind.

Bullshit. I don't know what else to say.

but you just can't stop. You're such a fool! I gave this a 5

for the illiterate embiciles who vote more than 2 stars.

1 star or less

This store is neither BTB, Loving wives, cuckold nor anything else but pure rubbish. It has no meaning and makes no sense.

Its's just bad.

# 1 Submissive gay looser

What utter sh*t!

BULLSHI......!

You should do a sequel where he is 50 years old. His wife is with him for the security, no love just pity. His kids have no respect for him. And when he realises his life is a joke and that he has wasted it he hangs himself!!!

This story sucked in all dimensions. That poor husband is such a pussy I almost cried for him. If this is the best you got, stop.

Write about real people next time.

Just plain old unbelievable rubbish.

One little backrub, followed by a finger bang, and she's all his? Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha please stop your killing me. No, Really. Please stop. Teenagers should not be on this website anyway

stupid every way that you could look at this thing imposing as a story

beyond even constructive critique

compared to this the hobbit seems real

No matter who it is to be happy in life a person needs to have pride in who they are and how they relate to others. I am pissed that I was not warned about this story. There is no pleasure in reading it in any way. How it went from a pleasant story of love and understanding to events and behaviors that are not understandable based on the character development that went before. Sam cannot be the character she was in the first of the story. Then to finally choose to go on the honeymoon with sis and hubby. Yuk. I like stories that have romance, maybe forgiveness. If the relationship then includes real remorse, agreement on boundaries etc then getting back together. This story has the protagonist accepting a life that is self destructive and impossible to live over time. If anything it would kill his immune system because of stress. My second most hated story on this site.

rubbish.

1 star for a load of bollocks.

The characters in this story are not even remotely believable. Just pure crap.

In all my years I have met some real losers, but never a woman who acts nearly as stupid as Sam, as a woman I am really offended you think there are women out there as cold and dumb as you make her out to be.

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Bearing in mind this is supposed to be a Valentines Day story entry I can't help but wonder whether I, and apparently many others, have simply missed the joke?

Alternatively perhaps I overlooked the new booby prize for the lowest rated story in the contest?

I'm feeling generous though so I'll simply say it's not one of your better efforts.

Or he's retarded.

Why would Sam stay married to a man she doesn't desire? There is over 50 million eligible men in the US and she would stay with him? Why?

Divorce him, take half his shit, leave him homeless and paying alimony and find a man who satisfies her and she can respect. But this?

This was an abortion.

What a dick loser he is . One of us never would have made it out of the hot tub but if shock needed to be worn off first then the largest bottles would've been broken over heads that night

Playing is one thing if both parties are involved but any bitch did that to me I'd ruin their life..

of course this wouldn't happen, but it is fantasy. it is too unlikely, stil the humiiation of the husband will turn on masochists

You could not have written about a more pathetic man if you were trying to make him a sad sack. He couldn't or wouldn't help his sister. There is simply no fun or entertainment in reading about a spineless coward. 1 star.

It's hard to imagine that this would actually happen. I realize this is just a story for wimp cuckolds everywhere. I can't visualize the husband being such a wimp on his Birthday, and later on at the end of this crappy tale. I don't believe a husband would succumb to permitting his wife to become pregnant by another man. I also can't fathom the husband not having sexual relations outside this poor excuse of a marriage. I am really surprised the husband didn't grab a baseball bat and physically both the wife and Brad. It's sad that you can't give a score of zero.

I thought the story was written well enough but it seemed as if the first part of the story was written by a different person. The last part of the story has Tom with a complete different attitude about Brad, a person he didn't like at the first part of the story. And suddenly his wife turns into a whore, right before our eyes and her husband just accepts it. Did I miss the lobotomy her husband got? How did he and his wife change so suddenly? I enjoyed the story but the transition seemed forced.

was the dumbest freaking story I've ever read on the internet. And I've read some dumb ones. As an author, your mind is completely out of wack.

This was so stupid it was funny!

i cant see how anyone would sympathize with a milquetoast like that. make him kill himself.

but I can't help to have a bad taste in my mouth with the ending. Their marriage was not strong at all. Sam didn't really love Tom, no matter how they lived up until that Valentine day. A wife just does not giver her body and sexual organs to a cretin like that. Tom should have either taken his fists and beat his face in or taken a ball bat and busted his head in. It was his responsibility to uphold the honor of his wife. Else he should have walked away, moved out with a divorce, and let the slut raise the bastard child on her own. Sorry, I just don't like cuckold stories.

Story was good. I enjoyed it. But the ending did kind of suck. Maybe you should write one about their honeymoon and tell us what happened. Lol.

....at all? This is a blatant copy of any one of a dozen other helpless cuck stories here.

You style is OK, but you don't engage us in your characters well enough to convince us to suspend disbelief when your situation goes hard left, the stupid cuck turning into a drooling, incapable moron and the wife a whore and happily willing slut.

We all know and acknowledge that any rational man would have told him to drop dead when he failed to take the requested taxi. Most men would have brought out the shotgun and invited brain dead to leave and never return, just about the time he asked to join them in the hot tub.

It actually went south with the asshole coming back in after the loud discussion during their early dinner. From that point on, it was all a fucking joke.

God, it was all so insulting!

NO thank you.

You probably wrote the most pathetic contest story this year.

Worst story for Valentines day contest.Will dampen the mood of whoever reads this pathetic story.Readers Strongly advise you don't waste your time and ruin your mood by reading this shit.

I think the author is the same husband as represented in the story who gets off by seeing his wife fucked by someone else.

ONLY 1 STAR BEACUSE I HATE IT.

Boo hooo

writing is decent. story telling is pathetic