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Valentine's Interrupted

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/21/16

fucking pussy

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by looking4it01/21/16

Ugh. That's all that needs to be said.

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by screwher01/21/16

Pass

Sorry, generally I can go for hotwife /cuckold stories in a big way. The sex was definitely hot but leading up to it and the aftermath took me right out of it.

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by JayHailey01/21/16

Trash

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by Anonymous01/21/16

Funny, but...

...getting old pretty fast. It seems authors these days write just to piss off the cuck-haters...

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by EgoTrixi01/21/16

Anonymous is wrong...

...they don´t write to "piss off cuck-haters"...They write these stories because it´s the only way left for themselves to get off, as ordinary sex seems to be off limits or impossible to get...

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by fifteen1601/21/16

Own Pleasure

Author's write for their own enjoyment and anyone who cares to read, started well but allowing brad to get into the hot tub did not work for me and then it was down hill all the way to the end. A better crafted middle and ending is possible but well done to the writer for taking the time to write.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

re: EgoTrixi, fifteen16

I would usually agree with both of you, but when you look at this author's other stories and consider how stupid and overdone this plot is, it's pretty easy to see what his purpose was here...

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by jasjon01/21/16

1

-100 if possible. Trash.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

Brad was right he is a douche

Fantasy? This is your fantasy?

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by Anonymous01/21/16

a very sick story, the Brad character is braindead, the wife a basic whore, and the husband mentally ill

remember dead wives, and brainless fucks, tell no lies.

Divorce the day after the party is the best ending possible, if no one dies first

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by Anonymous01/21/16

same old lines of I hate this story spoken by dear annony/ Very tiring ashole of LIT very

tiring!! So I gave it a 5 to help it along. Good LW story about a wife who fucks other men. That's what LW is all about you dumb fucking fag annony!

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by bonnietaylor201/21/16

5

for content and effort. Eat shit annoy!

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by bonnietaylor201/21/16

EVERYONE Hunt down the asshole of LIT and cut his hands off so he can't type.

Good story!! Love the LW in this one

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by bonnietaylor201/21/16

5

to offset the asshole annony

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by jasjon01/21/16

Back again

And using name not like little cuck annony did when he emailed me. I don't need to have written a story on here to recognize cuck trash. If you have something to say, then say it here where everyone can read it. Or are you so insecure that you have to throw your hissy fits in private.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

meh

awesome start, strange middle and an aweful ending... i guess the category "loving" wives doesn't fit here. Omega Male status stories are kinda lame

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by jasjon01/21/16

Back yet again

Little cuck annony messaged me and called me a fag. Still doesn't have the spine to say anything in public. Boo hoo hoo. That's OK I turned off private feedback so I won't get any more emails from you. Bye crybaby.

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by Ducky701/21/16

I know that this would be one of those fucking sucking cock stories

1*********** Don't bother to read it.

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by Slirpuff01/21/16

Crap

Why won't they let us rate stories like this less than 1*.......
No husband would have allowed this to happen...but in some peoples mind,
there aren't any normal husbands left out there..
Sad isn't it....

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by Anonymous01/21/16

blegh...

Author should kill himself for writing such sick shit.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

If Dave still loves her

He must be a garbageman or a pimp. I would at least charge Brad enough each month to have a nice apartment (Where I would live by myself with all my girlfriends) and never let the bitch in my home again. And Brad needs to have his name on the birth certificate and pay child suooprt. By the way who is going to keep her company and pay her bills from now on. Not Dave if he has even one ball.

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by fisherone01/21/16

Burial of love

I would have shut brad down at first stage of clothing being rearranged. One of us would be down for the count. Then to add insult she cut him off from the honey pot. This all happened on his birthday and valentines day. This shows little love and respect. For a child to raised in this is demented. It's all about her self serving pleasure. If this is a birthday present skip it and just leave.

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by rixels01/21/16

Why?

This story was written just to irritate the readers.

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by Harddaysknight01/21/16

never try to win a contest in this category

It is contest suicide.

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by Pappy701/21/16

Piece of shit.

Why in the hell can't they add a whiny, cuck section to this site. Bullshit.

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by vastiesmith201/21/16

We would rather have you piss off and acting like the asshole you are !!

We all laugh at your dumbass comments and your need to read these stories knowing they will make you upset! You're a fucking joke dear annony and Pappy!

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by Anonymous01/21/16

Are there really guys that weak?

I guess I am abnormal, but this would have turned into one of those double homicides you see on the murder porn channels. I'd definitely be in prison if this occurred.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

Don't read this

unless you are really into demeaning cuck stories. If so, this is one of the best.

anon.1

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by Anonymous01/21/16

At least

At least consider adding some realistic behavior if you write about how humans act.

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by Anonymous01/21/16

this is junk

Another cuckhold piece of crap

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by aptonthe50301/21/16

Absolute Trash

Totally lame story. What began as an interesting story with good characters, descended into the garbage heap with a ridiculous protagonist with a whore of a wife (life long love relationsip - bullshit!)

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by Anonymous01/21/16

0 stars!

WTF is wrong with you? How demented is that pea brain of yours to subject the rest of us to this utter,complete, dumpster fire of a story??? Seriously go get help your brain is fucked up!!!

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by Anonymous01/21/16

You took a twist with NOTHING to back it up.

He's pissed about what happening, and suddenly he's okay with it. At the very least his reaction is no real reaction, just existing in the marriage for no good reason. The only token resistance is the "against my wishes" statement, but that's all.

Then there's his family. Does his sister hate him that much that she's culpable in cuckolding him?

Even in a category notorious for dreck, this is really, really, bad

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by john194601/21/16

sorry

Thats the last of your stories I'll read. Wish you a happy life

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by Anonymous01/21/16

a great story

the author must have come out of his mother's asshole, instead of her cunt

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by RapidResponder01/21/16

Cuck stories…

are all comedies! Laughed my ass off with this one! *

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by Anonymous01/21/16

The WORST STORY EVER !!

You've got to be one sick fuck to write shit like this. The three primary characters are completely flawed beyond belief. There's two minutes of my life I'll never get back !!

BDEarth

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by Anonymous01/22/16

Fucking wanker

What a load of shit please do not ever EVER write again.

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by Anonymous01/22/16

Stupid cuck story

Why do cuck stories get so stupid and over the top endings

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by Maxxxstyles01/22/16

This story

Was like a ruined orgasm. Very frustrating . The wrath of God would have been unleashed on Sam and Brad!

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by Twentyseven01/22/16

Works for me

There's always a place for parody.

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by impo_6101/22/16

1* for the sister...

1* for the sister...A sister that does this to her brother deserves to die in pain...

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by Anonymous01/22/16

Sick people everywhere

I cannot believe people actually get hot with this kind of scrap.

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by frontlinecaster01/22/16

Gee, whole lot of closeted cuckolds read this story and must have come hard considering how angry they are. You did good work then if that's the case, it's a porn site after all, not a forum for bitter, lonely old men and internet misogynists to rant about morality.

Five stars for actually writing a loving wives story, now of poor anons and guys like slirpuf there could just realized they're in the wrong section if this answers them this much.

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by AnnetteBishop01/22/16

Normally cuckolding is ok but too far

Sorry, I didn't (don't) like the concept. I could see it coming. I'm not even a little put off by cuckoldry, but it really has to be agreed. From my perspective this was terribly forced, I don't like force. Xoxoxo Annette

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by Many_Memories01/22/16

Remind me -

NEVER attempt to read ANYTHING you write!

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by SirBigfoot01/22/16

nope sorry

this one sucked. fuck that whore 1*

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by Anonymous01/22/16

The author needs to

Be killed.closet fags posting their shit in l w

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by Anonymous01/22/16

1 star

Wow that was so horrible hang yourself.

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