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Double Betrayal

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by Charliegutzache08/22/16

OMG

that was just bloody too funny for words, here the wife thought she had everything nailed down, an turns out not bloody likely at all, but still would have liked to have heard her an lover boy's reactions when they finally realize how they've been sucker punched, an they have got absolutely nothing at all to show for all of their planning.

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by ErotFan09/15/16

This may be a triple cross

With the coment about Best Man, Lisa sounds a bit interested in marrying Ryan!!!
Watch out Dave!!!

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by DrSemblance11/04/16

vickie and sbrooks said it best.

Anyways, well done.

Not too long, you made the woman a selfish cheating cunt without going SO way over the top exaggerated like you have with other stories.

So it kept it readable and interesting.

Very nice

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