Gondola Ride with Mom

good start

Your next two or three chapters should finish this up.
Two might cover the progress on Moms project and her second test ride with her sin.
Three might cover the opening of the project and their ribbon-cutting official startup ride.the celebration in the bosses office where he congratulates her and shows her the videos from the in gondola cameras he had installed before the first test ride which are fed direct to his private quarters.
Keep it up! You did me !

Loved flow of literary ride

Inspired dialogue, easy and yet edgy rapport with spot-on humor made this easy and pleasurable read. HeyAll took extra trouble with setting and inserted deadline for extra tension ( and release ). So very well played. Full marks.*****

I really loved your story. I liked the setting and the interactions of the characters.
It is a well written story with a lot of fun.

I have to concur with a previous commentator, it is a story where you wish you could get another chapter. It is a story with a potential for a great love story.

Gets my fantasy moving.

fantastic

Hilarious yet sexy! Nice!

happiness is a new HeyAll story first thing in the morning

Mom is a no-nonsense lady. She knows what'll put the radiance on her face, and on her kid's face too. "Cum inside the hole where you came from." How many sons dream of hearing those words from their own mother? For lots and lots of boys, blowing their young balls up inside their own mommy, shooting her full of their warm creamy semen, is simply the best life has to offer. The really good news is that her son's got plenty more where that came from, and he'll be shooting it up the same warm wet ever-loving cunt he came out of for years to come.

This needs to continue, add some growing romance in there and you're set for a great story! Actually laughed my as off to her professionalism.

gndola

needs another test ride and follow up but was excellent story

Great story!! Wonderful plot and dialogue. A followup chapter would be great to have them be the first to ride on the grand opening.

Very Nice! Well executed!

I liked the fine pacing and sharp, snappy dialogue. The actual sex part was very hot, supported by a viable premise and build-up. Too many of these taboo stories are nothing but one big sex scene. Borrring. Yours, thankfully, included the right amount of scaffolding.

ELL DONE. AS GOOD BUILD UP AND THE TIMING WAS PREFECT. ALSO THE LENGTH OF THE STORY WAS JUST RIGHT, NOT TOO QUICK OR TOO DRAWN OUT. YOU REALLY MUST CONTINUE WITH THE STORY FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER. GOOD LUCK WITH THIS STORY AND ALL FUTURE MOTHER AND SON STORIES. WE WILL BE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER WITH MUCH ANTICIPATION.

Bravo!

As already mention... This was a very plauable and original storyline that flowed rather well with quite engaging characters to make the plot seem more realistic. And yes... A wonderly erotic sex scene that had me offering up a standing ovation.

Awesome

Needs couple more episodes, that what happens next, till the ride opens :)

Another great one!

Really good I love the story line. I also really like how quickly you create a picture in our minds of the characters. Once again well done, 5 stars. Thanks.

PAINTING WITH LANGUAGE IS AN ARTFORM

Thanks for writing for us.

Liked it

Great story overall, still it felt a bit rushed(haha). Curious to see if it goes anywhere from here now that the cat is out of the bag, so to speak.

Continue

Great story and certainly lends itself to a sequel.

Wow - great story!

Superb writing...boner-inducing, dramatic, unique. Congratulations for creating an erotic classic.

Rye and Ginger Ayle

5/5

As always, 5/5. Would love a sequel to this story.

Ditto

I am in agreement with the rest of the good reports, it does require a sequel or maybe few

Great story needs a sequel.

Great Beginning!

5 stars for sure. Possibilities are endless. Please continue!

MORE!

As everybody else has said please continue this saga!

What a ride.

Rock solid

Your story made me rock hard solid in mere seconds. Keep it going.

Oh my! I want a ride on the gondola too!

Great story......looking forward to part 2 where the boss lets out that he knows their "Secret".

Great story

Mother fuck - a great Aphrodisiac.

Keep on the good work!

Yes, Mom and her son I am sure want to go at it when they get home. I think his Mom finally found what she needs to relieve her stress. I don't think her son will mind; considering what he was thinking. Chapter 2 will be I am sure hot. Thank you.

Great Story

Please make a chap 2 on how it affects home life?? Siblings??Husband or ex?

Please do more

sooo hot. please make another part. this makes me so horny. great job. keep going ;)

I was there !

Just finished reading and I "am' impressed. Well written making me feel the ride as well as the stained undies.

Great story

Fantastic story, mom and son rode the gondola but it is her son's dick that was the best ride for mommy. After this amazing ride this loving son will harden each time mommy is near, craving to hop on his mother and hump away into her wet pussy until they both reach orgasmic bliss. Although the taboo nature of their illicit relationship might compel them to stop, the raw pleasure, and loving desire will push them to just one more sexual romp. The fact that mommy wanted her loving son to enter her unprotected womb and fill her with his virile seed will set the future rules for both mother and son, as each day the son mounts his mother and leaves her pussy a sodden mess. Mommy will be powerless to stop the relationship as well and will eagerly spread her once faithful marital thighs to give her son access to her body. As the story evolves mommy should beg her son for a baby as her hammers her wanton pussy as he bends her over her office desk, over the kitchen table, as she rides him in the back seat of her car, and as she spreads her thighs on her marital bed. If her son fills his mommy with his semen enough times, mommy's belly will eventually swell with her son's love child.

Good.

It's so good the story itself demands more chapters.

Whew!

You wrote one hell of a hot story! Actually, it ended too quickly… Just like the ride! You can easily expound upon the story and even write more about a budding relationship.

More more more

Hot story good job and please give us more

This story was great. Short, but man was it great. Sequel whenever you can, it needs more exposition after their gondola ride! Again, great work!

Fantastic.

You have written like the legendary. So hot, no BS, pure lust and sex. Sequel is expected.

Floated my Boat!

Loved it!

Need more Moms

What a great experience something such as this would be if the practise was more accepted than condemned
as it is now

Reward

I think seeing this project through to completion deserves some recognition from her boss. Perhaps an expenses paid romantic trip to Venice for her and her young lover for a real romantic gondola ride.

Loved it. Very sexy and fun story to read.

Loved it, need sequel

Great sexy story....Need a sequel where a romantic feeling between the 2 develops with hot sex ( and a pregnancy). More!!!!!

More please!

Loved it! Definitely more needed!

nice quickie

sometimes a quickie is all you need. thanks for your efforts.

Original Idea

I like the idea of this story. Original and creative. The mother using her son to get ahead at work is a nice change from the over-done concept of using women to further the males career.

Good story.

Good enough to warrant a sequel. How about a flight on the corporate jet at the insistence of the boss. A week in Italy to work on the improvements the ride needs might lead to new levels of intimacy.

So much fun!

Please follow up with more of these two :)

Great fun-well done as usual.

Always love your light, but sexy tone.

Better than expected

This turned out to be a great story. When does the sequel come out?

Loved it!

It was slow getting started, but when they finally got into it, it worked!

amazing

this is a well thought out story. thank you. D Ross