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Timeshadow 02

byAdrian Leverkuhn©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/26/16

Climate change?

You lost me when the you decided to insert climate change in the story. When someone can intelligently explain how Greenland came to be covered in glaciers after being farmed by Vikings I may be convinced that global warming is a problem. For now, global warming is a religion for weak minds.

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by Sidney4301/26/16

Very interesting so far, looking forward to what happens and more importantly the result "you" desire. You have made some assumptions which I don't have to agree with to enjoy the ride.

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by Anonymous01/26/16

Very intriguing.

At about the same time as I discovered T.M., I was an avid fan of an S.F. Writer by the name of Hans Dominik.
This was about the time of WW2.
Of course he had no idea of the real course science and technology would take.
He stipulated as the invention that would be dominant as being anti gravity.
My memory isn't so sharp as it was then so I don't remember many details but it seemed reasonable to a teenager.
I have no idea why this memory popped up in my mind reading this fascinating story.
D.S.

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by dinkymac01/26/16

Super!!

Thanks for sharing a great read.

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by Anonymous01/26/16

IT'S

You are certainly one of the more literate writers here on Literotica. I enjoy your stories very much and am looking forward to the continuation of this one. One little thing nags at me. The word “it’s” is a contraction of “it is”. The possessive of the word “it” is “its”. You have been confusing the two, using “it’s” as a possessive. Don’t mean to nitpick, but the better written a story is, the more glaring a small error like this is.
MichaelG

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by Anonymous01/26/16

I have to agrea with the previos coment, definatly more please asap.

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by rightbank01/27/16

prolific is not expansive enough

the scope of genre. the breadth of the topics. the shear volume of material.

Adrian, how do you juggle so many different shaped ideas and keep them all in the air at the same time?

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter of this new series
while watching for you to submit other chapters in other stories
simultaneously.

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by bruce2201/28/16

Good food for thought

AL seems to be good at every style of writing. It is truly a pleasure to read his projections. This a really good alternate history SF

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by GenghisKhan02/24/16

Small norw on rough demography

Today, 2016, Earth's population is almost 8B.

So by 2035, it WILL definitely be more than what it is now (as the human population hasn't shown it has plateaued off, yet; and I think we don't plateau until the 10B to 13B range: I've seen that really fascinating demographer/statistician === Hans Rosling === from either Sweden or Denmark or Switzerland... and he gave a rather compelling, all-positive take on it; but I still don't think he's right... I think the human population will continue to grow very substantially in the next 50 years).

Very large natural phenomena === of which we are, as an organism === don't behave like small ones.

Anyone could google it, but rough estimates in my head said by 2035, it'd likely be between 9.5 to 10.5B or so.

I believe currently less than 10 countries, among roughly 200, are NOT producing enough to replace their deaths; so that means over 90% of the countries in the world, including China, the USA, Brazil, Indonesia, and India === as well as the whole of the African continent and much of Asia === are still increasing, although some (like the USA and China) are increasing at a slower rate than others (like India, Brazil, etc)

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