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by fawnsage01/23/16

Lust not love

I love your story. But maybe you should include scenes of them not engaged in sexual but conversation or where she does something thoughtful for him and vice versa. That shows love.

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by redlion7501/24/16

fawn has a point,sex is good sex is life just sometime we might actually want to know that they can speak the same language.

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by Ariana_Garvey01/25/16

Book to come

These are selected excerpts from an upcoming novel. Ariana and Patrick aren't even the only characters. :)

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