Depends a bit how the story will progress. If he will turn out to be some cruel bastard she will despise or if she will be able to melt his heart. Part 2 of the story is more of that reluctance type but who knows what will come afterwards.
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Anonymous02/01/16
Intriguing start
Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Anonymous02/04/16
Engrossig
After a long time came across story based on this region and culture to be thought provoking and could have semblance to the going ons. Future of this story looks to be hot and wet.
Keep up the good work.
Sam
kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com
If you liked this first chapter you might want to know that I rewrote this short story into a full novel that us available on Amazon "Rosebud and the Sheikh". The story there is a lot more complex and not just erotic scenes.
Romance?
Is this in the right category?
Reluctance or Romance?
Depends a bit how the story will progress. If he will turn out to be some cruel bastard she will despise or if she will be able to melt his heart. Part 2 of the story is more of that reluctance type but who knows what will come afterwards.
Intriguing start
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Engrossig
After a long time came across story based on this region and culture to be thought provoking and could have semblance to the going ons. Future of this story looks to be hot and wet.
Keep up the good work.
Sam
kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com
Go read the book
If you liked this first chapter you might want to know that I rewrote this short story into a full novel that us available on Amazon "Rosebud and the Sheikh". The story there is a lot more complex and not just erotic scenes.
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