All Comments on 'Quarters Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Proofreading

Spellcheck was in full force with this chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed part 1 and looked forward to this. It was difficult to concentrate on the scene as I became so distracted trying to make sense out of each sentence.

I would enjoy reading it again after corrections.

Missy10256Missy10256about 8 years ago

I wanted to favorite this story. I think it's super erotic. However the spelling and editing errors made it impossible to stay focused on how erotic it was.

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 5 years ago
And Compensation is Provided

I hope "Master" realizes he's going to have to replace all the clothing articles that he destroys with the scissors. The cost of a garter belt, the cost of a skirt, the cost of a bra are big items in a secretary's budget. If he makes her lose her job, I'd be losing him with a lawyer if necessary.

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