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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/22/16

Very nice story.

Sure would have been nice if it were 2-3 chapters longer.

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by SirBigfoot01/23/16

good story.

but you rushed the ending. Could have been great if you had made more chapters or a longer tale.

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by Anonymous01/24/16

You stated it was 1970, then made a few more mentions of it being "in those days" then the girl josh picked up talked about them exchanging texts. Texting in the 70's?

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