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My Girlfriend's Slutty Roommate Ch. 02

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by Anonymous06/19/16

Amazing story

There were no comments on this great story, so I feel the need to tell you how much I liked it and why.
I love the theme, but this story is also well-written. It doesn't exaggerate too much like stories like this often do, so it feels very realistic while also being "hardcore" enough to fulfill the fantasy. The characters thoughts and intentions are described well, but the focus is on the description of the sexual acts, a mix that I very much like. I hoped it would be a bit longer, but that also has the benefits of not repeating itself.
I hope you find the time and inspiration for a third chapter!

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by Anonymous12/27/16

Nicely written

Hot and well written! Keep up the good work!

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