I thought it was a great story. The fact that the characters acknowledged a line that they wouldn't cross but then had an erotic encounter gave it a titillating edge. Writing a story about infidelity is a long way from condoning infidelity.
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Anonymous02/17/04
Loving her spouce?
I don't see any loving of any spouce in this story, I do agree she's a cheating slut. You should have had her husband killed fighting the fire while she is screwing 'one of his best friends' then have her laugh and run to Paul and fuck him again. I can see her doing that as she is one cold bitch anyway.
The content is plainly labled---If you don't like this style of story why are you here and why are you reading it???
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Anonymous04/02/05
And
You know hubby's friend won't say a word to anyone about his encounter with the wife either. Yeah Right? lol
What would have been cool would have been if hubby had been porking the other guy's wife too. She hadn't been out of town after all and they were at a motel fucking like two dogs.
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Anonymous08/20/06
You need to continue
Found the lead up to the act better than the act.
Would like the woman to have the freedom to continue. Have the sex within the loving relationship of her and her husband. What could be sexier than desire and permission.
English
Loving wife????
Cheating slut more like it.
Not even a well told story.
Same old crap in the other million cheat stories.
I don't agree....
I found it very erotic.
Great sensuous story!
I really enjoyed this! It's a great hot erotic story--about passion and desire--but still loving her spouse--
Good Read
I thought this was a very arousing and enjoyable story. Thanks.
Good Stuff
I thought it was a great story. The fact that the characters acknowledged a line that they wouldn't cross but then had an erotic encounter gave it a titillating edge. Writing a story about infidelity is a long way from condoning infidelity.
Loving her spouce?
I don't see any loving of any spouce in this story, I do agree she's a cheating slut. You should have had her husband killed fighting the fire while she is screwing 'one of his best friends' then have her laugh and run to Paul and fuck him again. I can see her doing that as she is one cold bitch anyway.
Love these Guys who read and then complain
The content is plainly labled---If you don't like this style of story why are you here and why are you reading it???
And
You know hubby's friend won't say a word to anyone about his encounter with the wife either. Yeah Right? lol
What would have been cool would have been if hubby had been porking the other guy's wife too. She hadn't been out of town after all and they were at a motel fucking like two dogs.
You need to continue
Found the lead up to the act better than the act.
Would like the woman to have the freedom to continue. Have the sex within the loving relationship of her and her husband. What could be sexier than desire and permission.
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