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by Anonymous

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by LilMissNerd101/24/16

Not my usual bag, but well written and gives you the opportunity to see another variety of nonhuman. Reminds me of the old Duck Tales cartoons that were on when I was a kid, looks like a dog, but walks and talks like a human. Great imagination.

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by Anonymous01/24/16

Really fun story

I really enjoy your anthropomorphic canine-girl story.

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by SciFurz01/24/16

@LilMissNerd1 & anonymous

LilMissNerd1, I'm happy to hear you say it's well written, especially when it's not your usual taste, so I can imagine I seduced you into reading it. ;-)
I haven't watched much of Ducktales since the timing on TV was wrong for me, but then I did catch Duckula and Duckman (to stay in theme and show off my twisted mind o.O; )
Thinking about non-human characters, there's tons in children's cartoons, and one of the most popular movies was Avatar, blue cats everywhere! :-p
Hope I can seduce you to read more of these stories and lure you to the dark fur side. *puppy eyes*
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Anonymous, happy to see you enjoyed it, and I hope I can offer more in the future. :-)

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by Tenou02/03/16

Maybe it isn't the best way to say it, but this is to my taste in so many aspects that it looks as if I had wrote it for myself. Though I like longer stories, this one is short, has a small hint of a bad ending (with the appearance of the brother) and then everything ends well, with them becoming couple and having a sweet ending. Very much in the line of my favorite erotic mangas.

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by SciFurz02/03/16

@Tenou

I think between writers it's a good way to say it, thanks!
I tried to keep it short without losing the sense of romance and suspense to keep it interesting enough.
Maybe I'll make a long story of it one day. :-)

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