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Very sexy had me moaning too!
Very well written and a believeable story to tantalise the erotic mind.
Loved it!!
This story was so well-written. i don't usual enjoy lesbian erotica, because so often it's crass or it seems artificial, but yours left me feeling very tingly and wet :)
Hot
But too short
Very good!
Part two please ;)
Thank you for the great story!
L
Good tale
This is a good little tale but marred by one careless mistake. You had Copper's relative Rose calling the stranger Rebecca three paragraphs before she actually introduced herself. If you read your stories over very carefully when you've finished writing them, hopefully you'll avoid this kind of error. I don't think the story calls for a second part---it's complete as it is.
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