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Rope and Veil Pt. 02

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by Missy1025601/26/16

I'm dizzy from holding my breath through this whole story. I love Amelia, I love Alex. I love the symbolism, the language of the writing, the thought provoking deeper meaning behind each word and image you create. I'm stunned.

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by Anonymous03/04/16

Quite a gift

for you Missy and the rest (of us readers).
It's interesting what makes and breaks a human.
Brings to mind a US citizen with paralysis that sued his insurance company in order to get funds for amputating both "useless" legs. While a future with a cure for spinal injuries approaches.
My fancy in acrotomophilia goes in the direction of resistance to pleasure is futile.

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by telboy1704/11/16

Still brilliant

You are taking us on a great ride with such skillful writing and an emotional story. The nuances of the wordplay between them is brilliant.
I was wondering earlier if Amelia could conceive and am so happy for them now. Hoping that we find out how they face their new challenge - though I doubt that for these two the challenge would be that great.

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by Anonymous02/25/17

Role Reverseral

the girl is acting like a guy so you have the guy act like a girl. can't both be strong.

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by Anonymous02/25/17

This story is more about Alex and his feeling of inadequacy than Amelia and her disability. She does everything perfect, other than the legs, she is overcoming nothing. I think you made him too dependent on a stronger person. Given her personality, I don't see how she could like someone that doesn't measure up to her.

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