All Comments on 'The Boss Gets Her...'

by BigJohnHankins

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Are you or aren't you....

..going to bone her ass? I thought you said something about that in your story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
I loved the street slang comin outa da broda'.

I am a professional white male with an 8 inch cock and I dont use slang and smart shit to get into women. Your character smacks of street talk jive that a professional would never use.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
No interest- please stop

True. Right. Crap

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Too rushed

The writer's breathless pace and poor descriptive language don't allow the reader to fully picture and savour the scenes. I hope he doesn't fuck as breathlessly as he writes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
4+ (****+)

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