Prisoner in his Harem Ch. 02

well written

I like the story line. It will be interesting to see if she tries to make an escape or abort a pregnancy

How do you think it will continue?

Please let me know if you like the story so far and what you will think will happen with the Sheikh and Rosebud after this episode.

ridiculous

He thinks she de liberately tried to kill his beloved children, yet is making passionate love to her and treating her like a treasured member of his harem? Its fucked up that shes innocent, but even worse that this powerful man has absolutely no balls. Anyone else would have cut her head off or given her the needle.

Vindication

I would love to see her vindicated and maybe even persuade the Sheik to her way of thinking.

Editing

Editing is needed, very badly...I'm sure others pointed it out to you, but I don't want to waste time looking through comments - but it is THRUST, not trust...and many other terrible errors in grammar. The story has no real depth, no background on her or reference, it is like she has no thoughts at all.

I vote for abortion. But then again, I always vote for abortion. Too many bloody people on this planet. Oh, and that they find that chap Harrison, feed him toilet water until he fesses up and make the sheikh consider somebody other than him and the prison guard to decide how much evidence they need before they hang and rape (sorry, other way around) a person in the future to ward off embarrassment. And also so that Violet can claim the abortion-fee back from him, which is only fair. Oh and that Poppy realises he is the only arabian man with an extraordinary big dick (I did a field-test in my youth) and it is best just to keep him, so they live happily ever after.

Actually a very nice romantic story, if you can forgive Casanova wanting to breed Napoleon's army all by himself. What he wants it for, nobody knows, as he's into the hippy thing - peace, incense and freely available sex for men. I must say, taken in context, Harems sound like a fair deal - so many women, so few men after a war. One of the reasons men should wake up and just realise what a bad idea war is. Every man is cannon fodder, except for the fat cats who survive to snogg the multitudes of sex hungry females after the thing is over. Quite brilliant, really.

I love your sweet and different accent. And am looking forward to the next chapter. Especially if they get a hold of Harrison. That would be cool. In the meantime she can make Casanova fall in love with her. He deserves a good cry when she dumps him (hope, hope, oh bloody hope).
Evebroughtanaxthistime

Love this story!!

My dear....the lovemaking scene was absolutely perfect.
Please keep up the good work!
You have great talent!

An editor would be helpful....and perhaps explaining the thinking behind why he was kind to her rather than harsh as I had feared he might be.

Excellent story though!

Why he is not a total brute?

Thank you. Thank you. As this chapter is written from Rosebuds point of view we cannot see what is going on in Fouad's head. So keep on reading chapters 2-4-5 as in chapter 5 that will be revealed.

As for editing: been thinking of making this into a Kindle novel but although I have several native English friends it is a bit too private to share and ask them to edit. So maybe when the story is finished I should just dare and send it to a foreign publishing house.

The story is finished --- look under Romance

Written the 7th and final chapter. It is found in the Romance selection.