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Still Life with Rumpled Flesh

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by jthserra02/10/04

Excellent poem

I missed the allusions here, and yet the poem grabbed me with its rhythm and rhyme.

"Better bring me a helping fresh
Of that warm and gently rumpled flesh."

Inspired ending...

jim :)

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