I really liked your story but wished it was a little longer though.
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Anonymous02/13/04
Cool.
Very original. Needs more though.
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Anonymous04/30/05
Role Reversal - Interesting
I like you idea for The Program. I have been working on a version of it myself, one with a particular angle on practicality. Mine is a few pages long but not yet ready for publication. I guess I should go ahead and upload it here as "Part 1", and then hope to finish the rest. Thanks for your submission!
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I really liked your story but wished it was a little longer though.
Cool.
Very original. Needs more though.
Role Reversal - Interesting
I like you idea for The Program. I have been working on a version of it myself, one with a particular angle on practicality. Mine is a few pages long but not yet ready for publication. I guess I should go ahead and upload it here as "Part 1", and then hope to finish the rest. Thanks for your submission!
Opposite of The Nudist
A great twist on the idea of nudism.
Great story.
SHAME
good possible of a 5, good story but without other chapters it was pain bad. Yes you can write well… But there needed to be more.
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