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Beautiful!
Great dialogue, good pace, awesome situation! Please continue!
Nice Writing
Good first story. Short (ha) but sweet. I hope you continue. Also hope you'll proof better before submitting. Thanks for a good read.
A great story ...
... especially for a first outing. Well done and welcome, dirtymaria, and please bring us more! Five stars from me, but one word of advice -- don't submit your story while the ink is still wet!
When she got back?
He was gone. Like her imaginary control. Did you bother to proof read this nonsense?
Really bad. Awful.
Ha!
That will teach you to have a small penis! Lovely story, quick paced, imaginative, descriptive. Glisten on...
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