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Excellent
Your poem has no pretense--it's articulate, yes, and I like the "I'm not going to be a poet now" refrain (a great contradiction since you're saying it in a poem!). Thing is, it's utterly honest without being crude and that, in my opinion, elevates it over the countless other poems on this subject posted here. Really well done. :)
you really
seem to have a wonderful grasp of conveying feeling without the clutter of too many words. I like your style and your descriptions :)
Raw words here
the raw force of this poem drives it. Pure lust... Normally I don't associate cock and cum with erotic poetry, but it works here. Well done.
what you see is what you get....
Just raw sex written with great spacing.
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But I liked it.
Great sex!
LOVED THIS! Thanks for the pure, raw sex poetry.
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