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by Anonymous

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by Angeline02/09/04

Not quite there...

and I suspect it's cause your feelings on the content are unresolved. It's very good (and the reference to The Stand gave it a nice chill) ), but I'd put it aside and revise it when the story is more resolved or you have more space from it. Just an opinion... :)

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by jthserra02/10/04

Yes, I feel the shock here...

the cold, cold loneliness. excellent poem.

jim :)

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