by Minnie_minx
For a short story this was very well written and sizzled with heat.. Looking forward to the next chapter!
For a short story this was very well written and sizzled with heat.. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Fantastic story, but it made me cry because I feel like Katy :( Well written and very hot.
I only gave you 4 out of 5 though because Ryan withholding his orgasm until Katy said, "Now!", just didn't ring true. Otherwise, a cool situation and a well-written piece.
You should finish all your stories, I love your style.
It’s been 4 years! Where’s part 2??? Do you want me to beg? I’ll beg. I’ll make you dinner for a week. I’ll cover for you at work or take care of your kid. What’s keeping you so busy that you haven’t been able to write??? >__<