All Comments on 'Flatmate Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

all i can say is wow

TJ678TJ678about 8 years ago
Smoking hot

For a short story this was very well written and sizzled with heat.. Looking forward to the next chapter!

TJ678TJ678about 8 years ago
Smoking hot

For a short story this was very well written and sizzled with heat.. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice.

Fantastic story, but it made me cry because I feel like Katy :( Well written and very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Fantastic, so hot!

Can't wait for more!

lowkeyonelowkeyonealmost 8 years ago
WOW

Great story and very well told. THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I loved this story

Please write more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
so hot

I love this story, please write more

lowkeyonelowkeyonealmost 7 years ago
WOW

Hot, hot, hot. Great story. Thanks.

TheDreamGirlTheDreamGirlover 5 years ago
Reminder

Please finish part 2. We've been waiting 2 years

cullodencullodenover 5 years ago
Great build up

I only gave you 4 out of 5 though because Ryan withholding his orgasm until Katy said, "Now!", just didn't ring true. Otherwise, a cool situation and a well-written piece.

KoollavaKoollavaalmost 5 years ago
Please finish this one, too!

You should finish all your stories, I love your style.

TheDreamGirlTheDreamGirlabout 4 years ago
This is cruel and unnatural punishment

It’s been 4 years! Where’s part 2??? Do you want me to beg? I’ll beg. I’ll make you dinner for a week. I’ll cover for you at work or take care of your kid. What’s keeping you so busy that you haven’t been able to write??? >__<

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