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*Breath taking* & *Hot*
Literotica at its best. Or should I say Kiss-Me-First!!
Awsome tale Kiss-me, It was as if I were there. "Bravo."
She knows how to please ....
She has a talent for drawing the reader in to her story, and, from a male perspective, does it in an extremely tantalising manner. Sensual, erotic, and extremely arousing, I would dearly love to see more submissions from Kiss Me First ....
Great Love story!
The story is great, passion filled love making, The ending is sad--but a great read!
Oh yes
It's not often I come across such well written story. Kiss Me First you've combined eroticism with love to perfection. I can't wait to read your next offering, I hope it's soon.
fantastic story
Hi Kiss a very well written story, vivid enough to allow the reader to feel part of it, hope to read more of your work real soon
second time around
Even reading this a second time I was still impressed with the authors ability to bring the passions of lovemaking to a fever pitch.Bravo
So very nice!
Hi Kiss..... that was so lovely....I hope you are busy creating more delightful stories... I loved the tenderness, sweetness, not to mention the love making... More, more!!
Incredible
I loved the story. The way you described him slowly waking her up and the sensations of touch and smell made the story very erotic. Please post more stories.
Another great story
Keep up the incredible writing!
Melancholy
You story is lovely.
Makes a single person yearn for what he once had intimacy!
Awesome!!!
That was so well written!! I don't normally need a cold shower after reading so many stories on here, but DAMN!!!
That was HOT!! ;-)
The Perfect Story.
This is the perfect story of love, seduction and sensuality. There are few stories on lit that reach this degree of superb writing. This is one of them.
Fantastic
What I would give to be in her lovers position to fill her with my seed,great story and description.
That was erotic but...
That was really well written, me and my girlfriend thouroghly enjoyed it. It was really just the last few lines that we didn't like... the point that he was married. But still a great story.
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