Rather than «Romance» this story should be in the BDSM category.
I felt distress from reading about sustained grip on the throat nearly suffocating the woman. Dealing professionally with violent men, such behavior is considered the most alarming sign of abusive relationships that one should break out of as quickly as ever possible.
And what about the first four sentences indicating a story where the game would eventually be swung around? Did you forget those in your testosterone frenzy?
Sorry, the violent focus of your story prevented me from getting any excitement from it.
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Wrong category
Rather than «Romance» this story should be in the BDSM category.
I felt distress from reading about sustained grip on the throat nearly suffocating the woman. Dealing professionally with violent men, such behavior is considered the most alarming sign of abusive relationships that one should break out of as quickly as ever possible.
And what about the first four sentences indicating a story where the game would eventually be swung around? Did you forget those in your testosterone frenzy?
Sorry, the violent focus of your story prevented me from getting any excitement from it.
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