- All
Comments (20) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Me like....a lof
Such great chemistry and banter between the two. Love it. More please
*****
Five.
Keep it up!!
I'm in love !! Can't wait to read more.
His thoughts, her thoughts, wow....
A powerful combination of intensity, lust, desire and playful banter. He's at her home. He's getting to know her. Their needs are being answered. They are forming their own little bubble of an unnamed relationship. Too early to give it a name, the WANT in them is kindling a passion for more info about the other and lustful needs satiated.
I can't believe I'm jealous of a literotica story. (Yes it's sad but I am) Awesomely talented writing.
Love it!!
I especially like that they are older, but yet vulnerable and still willing to go for it.
This story has me laughing from their shared humor, sighing with a smile as they get to know one another, and turned on from the chemistry between them.
Five
I'm low key in love with Nathan.
Hot
I was just glued to this story, the flirting, the energy, the passion, I mean I want to meet a "Nathan" myself! Good stuff, 5 stars.
After I read this chapter I looked at the title...
And the word "fertilized came to mind" 😫😫😤😝
Please continue this...
I want to see how this grows. It's all about getting to know each other now, even though they sexually crave each other. This is what a strong like, or even obsession looks like in the "just getting to know you" stage. This could end here...or you could add what a date is like outside the realm of sex; the teasing pleasure of who can hold off the longest. There is something about the chase that can be just as sinful, leading up to what could be continued into something mouthwatering. Question, did Nathan have...hookups, friends w/benefits or was celibate since his divorce?
You got loyal readers already
Amazing! I laughed out loud because my husband is making tomato soup and grill cheeses as im reading this. Cant wait for more.
You had me at grilled cheese
I'm never leaving now! Grilled cheese and Nathan- best of both worlds!
Awesome read!!
Loving this story!!! The sexual energy and interaction between Maxie and Nathan is addicting!!! Anxiously awaiting the next installment! Shonda
Please continue...and you did :)
5 stars all the way!!!!
I just read the 1st part and was so impressed and wanted you to continue. Then I discovered that you had already written Parts 2 + 3 which I read and loved as well. You have a real talent with words and setting the scene and character interaction...love it. Also I think I would like a real life Nathan :)
MOAR!!!!! *addicted* 5*
Daaayyyyummm girl!!! i need to get hub for a nooner NOW!!!! write more sooooooonnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
5 star author
Another great chapter!
That was HOT!!!!
I love the playful banter between these two. Truly 5 stars!!
5 stars again and again......
You continue to hit them out of the park. The sex is intense as you unfold the characters more and more. Grilled cheese and Tomato soup is all about them, not the surroundings. Bare and erotic
Yes yes and yes!!
This was intoxicating to read. They have so much passion that I'm surplus to find out as to where that will lead. More please!
Did I mention that these two are fire?!
Because good lord, they are FIYAH! Hottest and most amazing thing I've read on here in a while. Five stars isn't enough, but it's what I got
I love them
So cute!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to How Do You Like Your Eggs? Pt. 03 or
More submissions by ErisJade.