All Comments on 'Dream of Babylon'

Smartly done, sandy. Our puritanical culture separates spirituality and sexuality. I don't know if the narrative is your imagination at work or an accuate representation of an ancient culture. It doesn't matter. It's effective either way.

Some may object to praising female sexuality in this way (although unlikely with most Literoticans), but turning the poem into an incantation makes it work.

We're coming to the end of a Challenge in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion threads in which a poem is recited using Varoom or Souncloud, web-based audio services. I would have enjoyed hearing this read.

PS For some reason my comment gets posted as anonymous. I'm greenmountaineer.

I love the wanton and unbridled lust in this poem. Makes me want to be a Babylonian soldier. Gave it a '5.'