All Comments on 'The Basketball Team's Bitch Ch. 01'

by HawaiianShirts

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Lucky guy

Being the team bitch is so erotic---I would love to take his place.

HawaiianShirtsHawaiianShirtsabout 8 years agoAuthor
squeeze shut not shit

Should be "squeeze shut" not "squeeze shit". Embarrassing typo that I caught shortly after submitting this but don't know how to edit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

There were a few typos. The story did however leave me wondering what it would feel like to have a fist in my Ass an my dick is standing straight up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
zzz

More queer shit.

vector2065vector2065about 8 years ago
Good start

Please continue this story. Would like to see how far you can take it and develop the characters. I have done some pretty wild shit, many have no idea how good it is to explore; keep up the good work. And as for the persons with the negative comments, it is easy to be like that if you are anonymous, pay no attention.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
That...

Was unexpected, but very good. Got me pretty damn turned on. Please continue. Take the rude comments as constructive criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Is this sponsored???

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