All Comments on 'A Great Night'

First story? Good work. Keep it up and try to build a little suspense, maybe more "foreplay" by the "Loving Wife" in HER story to her husband.

Percy.

Cheating slut more like it..

And a wimp husband as well.

Cliche ridden repeat of those thousands of other stupid stories here in lit.

RENAME THIS SECTION "CHEATING SLUT WIVES"

Don't pay any attention to the jokers below. This story is short and effective, certainly there could be more, but sometimes less is more.

Whilst this isnt a bad effort I have to say I am getting tired of stories where the husband has a smaller dick than the stud. My wife has been with about 50 men and only one or two were bigger than 6" (me). I am also getting tired of the husband eating the other mans cum. I know it happens, but as the other bloke said, this story is full of the same cliche's of a thousand others in here. I'd like to know how much reality v fantasy is in it

Well written and hot. You make me believe that it really happened. As I read it, I could see the scenes unfolding.

Keep up the good work.

OK so he has a penis size fetish and likes eating cum. To be honest, he's probibly gay and wants his wife to leave him. I don't believe for a second he or his wife are in love and he will loose her anyway due to his small dick and his inability to please his wife. Why are these stories all alike. Guys with small dicks giving their wives to guys with bigger dicks..Yea right!!

it really did sound authentic and to me that is pretty good

A GREAT NIGHT

lets correct that, even this far into the future

A GAY NIGHT for the husband and writer. Whom, we can assume is now single and hanging in gay bars.