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I don't always have to understand your poetry to enjoy it. The words themselves are a pleasure.
Mixed Emotions abound
in this poem, but I've been on the tilt-a-whirl myself a few times, and I know how it is. That last bit of imagery is wonderful--like looking at a quartet of photographs. :)
ahhhh
the pleasures of unkempt hair
and poems falling out, everywhere
:)
writer adds-
I feel an urge to explain this one.
It was made while I sat and tried to think of a poem to write. Scratchings in the dust waiting for the Pepsi truck to pull up.
hey Vic, glad you could make it as he raised the truck side like it was some garage door or New York store on Crime St.
needs a little grease Vic said,
wheres my Coke?
Pepsi. Thats all youll ever get from me, fucker
fuck you too, see ya next time
"okay"
dust
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