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great
I liked this story, good description of your characters surroundings,
very good twist at the end, over all well written and enjoyable.
Great job.
Oh, Neat!
Loved the twist of the tale.
HP
I Love It*****
What a great piece of writing. Very entertaining story!! Thanks for sharing.
Very nice, I wish that could happen in my life but my wife left me because of cancer 2 short years ago. Thanks for your story. 5 stars
Saw it coming; loved it all the more.
And I'm going to read all your stories now.
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