Brother's Girlfriend Seduces Me

Incest ? Taboo ?

I think you have the wrong category here, I'd call that Erotic Encounter

Yeah, when you post a story that has neither Incest or Taboo in the Incest/Taboo category, people will call you on it.

So... You're going to get a lot of people asking you if you're retarded or something.

Not taboo or incest, just a little nasty, but not much

Banging brother's slutty girlfriend is not particularly taboo, just unfortunate for him, so this is in the wrong category, this is properly a cuckolding story, so should be in LW or EE, not here. Next time check before you submit, no stars for being an idiot

Ever wonder why low scores happen?

LOUSY grammar, and wrong category!
If you can't write, don't try!
This would have been incest if you & your brother were sucking each other's cock while his cheating girlfriend was watching, or in the other room!!

Me and her? What are you, a fifth-grade drop-out?

This is what happens when someone decides to publish a short story before learning the tools of the trade. Basic rules of grammar, punctuation, spelling, quoting. The only thing good I can say about this story, is that you were more consistent than not, with using past-tense verbs.

Do write, practice, work with an editor or two and find some writing skills tutors, especially if you enjoy it. But until you have a better grasp of basic English writing skills, don't publish anything else.

Leaving aside all the bad grammar

This is just a terrible story

Potential

Story has a lot of potential. Definitely in the wrong category, but then again, sleeping with your brother's sister could be considered "taboo". With more writing practice, this could become a good author. The story was a bit short for my taste. Add a bit to the flirtation scenes, and a longer sex scene, maybe add the tension with the brother and you might have a solid three page story.

Why?

Why is this story in this section? Somebody goofed.

this is bull shit

First of all: Wrong category. Second of all: Horrible grammar. Third of all: past tense, really!

too short

need more

Taboo - right corner

Your grammar and pacing is debatable but the story is in the right category, it falls under taboo

A Spare Bathroom..

...to stay in. And that was just the start of the awfulness!

Fuck you, This was shit