All Comments on 'Big Butt Chronicles: Yvette'

I liked the way you sneaked up on the characters being mixed-race So many of these stories emphasize so-and-so being lily white or black as the ace of spades.

functionally illiterate.

Can't spell worth shit.

You use "big" words but spell them phonetically.

Jesus wept.

Why can't we give -1 stars?

Re: You are, without a doubt...

functionally illiterate.

Can't spell worth shit.

You use "big" words but spell them phonetically.

Jesus wept.

Why can't we give -1 stars?

Response:

Stalking me again (snore.)-biatch.

You never fail to bring the heat mondotoken

Personally I liked it.

Your best work yet.

this work is very good but won't u finish the cupid effect? it would be so nice if you ended it. ty

Mondotoken, this is why I love your shit, my nigga!

What a way to lose your V-card

Are you ever going to complete this story ??

Big Butt Chronicles Ch. 02: Latisha

It was placed out of order by the site: "You're Welcome"