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Rough Cut Ch. 03

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by Anonymous02/15/04

Sexy and Suspenseful

I'm not sure where this story is going, but I can't wait to find out. Your Moe character is stupdendous. The nurse is one hell of a dish. And I have a feeling Kitty is going to be a real bitch.

Keep those chapters coming!

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by Anonymous02/18/04

If Raymond Chandler was a member of Literotica

If Raymond chandler was on literotica, this is what he'd b e writing! I haven't enjoyed a story this much in years.

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by Anonymous07/26/06

Nice blowjob

Loved the nurse's blowjob.

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