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Zzzzzzzz...
The characters in your story need to fuck more and talk less.
Good Story, As Usual
Anony must be a porn addict. I'm looking forward to the next installments--which, I'm sure, will have some of the sex poor old porn/sex addict will still criticize,
Shut up, anony, if you don't have anything to say. WW's stories are thought-provoking, well-written, and interesting--especially the Iron Crowbwr stories.
Darned if I do, darned if I don't...
I have some people saying "less sex!" and that they skip the sex scenes. Then we have a non-erotic offering (and all of "Going Rogue" is non-erotic), and someone (hiding in anonymity) whines about no sex. There just is no satisfying all of the people all of the time....
About sex...
Commenting on the below comments. It does not take much to write a sex scene. I am just tired of reading about the same people having sex. You have so many good characters but it is the same people having sex and you tend to miss ooportunities for others.
For example... You could have written a scene for Cindy and Teresa when they went to her hometown for Teresa's fathers funeral. Then the next story at the end had Cindy go back before leaving the Vision to get Teresa to go home with her and Jenna but did not write a sex scene.
Let others fuck.
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