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Hmmm
I realise English isn't your first language, but I"m sorry. This is unreadable.
Well written and thanks for sharing
This story was electric! Glad to find something out of the ordinary. You should throw out all comments that are anonymous.
Nice job!
Congratulations on writing an interesting and erotic story, and that is what this site is supposed to be a.all about You certainly did better writing the story in English as a second language than I could have done writing in your native language. This is clearly a five star effort and I hope you keep up the good work.
Your English is about what I expect from a child.
And to those who "make allowances" for English not being your first language - who requested that you write in English, and why are you not working hard at Microsoft's call centre like you should be?
Seriously, this is unreadable, puerile, and typically formulaic trash from the bottom of a culture that has little (if any) respect for civilised norms - surely there must be a site somewhere for functional illiterates that you could frequent rather?
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