All Comments on 'Enslaved Roommate'

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ticklechambersticklechambersabout 8 years ago
Great!

loved the characters and confident tone of the story, very sassy.

Only wondered why she was wearing a bathrobe if she was fully dressed?

And amend sentence "As I headed out of classroom, a boy I recognized from another of my classes called out to me and came to talk."

Keep writing, thumbs up! Check out any of my stories if it interests you too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Loved it!

I am really considering either being my roomate's slave or mistress. I have the same story here. But me and my roomy are both dominant so we will probably be "fighting"over this.

FailedscoutFailedscoutabout 8 years ago
Very Good Story

I liked it a lot. Thank you for posting it here. Please continue.

graymangazergraymangazerabout 8 years ago
Very good.

I really liked this, short and sweet and straight to the point. There's a question about who is actually in control I think, a perfect case of topping from the bottom.

Tina obviously loves humiliation and Diana the power and control. Another chapter would be welcome to see whether Tina can actually turn her roommate, though I don't think she needs to as Diana will end up using her slave in every way imaginable anyway. Also I believe it's hot to have such an out and out lesbian enslaved by a straight girl.

Let's have a little more characterization and see just how far Tina will go.

Definitely more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
enslaved roommate

Very nice and left so other chapters can further.

look at cactusjuggler evil lair for some pointers on stories.

thanks for the read hope to see more from you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

This story is amazing, please post more, maybe make the next part a bit longer

IreadlesbianstuffIreadlesbianstuffalmost 8 years ago
I really hope part 2 is soon

This story was hot, and interesting, I want to see where the plot goes, and what other sexy situations these two can get into

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
I want a part 2

I really liked this story and I hope that there comes a part 2

DreamsofFaeDreamsofFaeover 7 years ago
Perfect!

I'd love to see more of this couple. Or just more like this from you. I'm always a fan of the whole dirty secret found out and exploited trope and you did it so well. The humiliation was beautiful as was the sense of hope.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic

A fun take on the Slave and Domme relationship where the Domme is less experienced then the Slave and the Slave has a secret agenda. Great story I would love to read more, keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
How to trap a domme

Brilliant story. First I have seen where the sub is in control of the domme although I suspect that that is far more common a relationship than thought. Very entertaining and I also would like more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

still one of the hottest fucking things I've read and I don't even really like feet, but I'd of loved to be in either position.

NinjaMan2NinjaMan2over 4 years ago
Amazing story!

I hope you write a sequel to this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Hot and exciting

I could so readily see myself as Tina ~ probably because this is the kind of unexpected encounter I would love to have!

I hope there is more to cum ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Oh... my.. goodness. "I'd let you, you know."

Easily one of the most powerful moments I've ever seen in a story like this. That line just rings in my head.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good writing more importantly I’m a male

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love this. Really want to try being like Tina.

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