All Comments on 'Cupid's Big Break'

by Daniellekitten

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gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 8 years ago
There were some really funny moments in this one

Great entertainment for a Tuesday in February! Glad Cupid got the job done in time. DK, you did miss one potential line... "Lucy! I'm home!"

Griffin_ScoutGriffin_Scoutabout 8 years ago
Dear God

Pun intended. I must say this was a different direction from your othe stories that I have read. I found it immensely enjoyable and was laughing at some of the references that you made. Absolutely loved it.

LovesAGoodStoryLovesAGoodStoryabout 8 years ago
O_O

Well I wasn't expecing it to go in that direction, but nonetheless, an unique read :)

tsurttsurtabout 8 years ago
Very Funny!

I loved this story, I agree, Lucy I'm home would have been great!

Thank you

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