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Storm of Shadows Ch. 06

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/09/16

please update already 😢

Can't wait for the rest of Kothi's story!!!

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by Masterskitten2603/11/16

If you've come in on this story in Storm of Shadows you MUST

Go back and read this on going saga from the very beginning! Please, it is absolutely AWESOME!!!!
I'm waiting breathlessly for the next chapter on pins and needles.
I check daily.
JazCullen has had me from the start and as the characters and families evolved I've laughed, cried, loved and went through the ups and downs of all of them with them.
Not many writers can do that to me. I would give more then 5 stars if I could!

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by Anonymous03/12/16

Desperate for more...

I hope you update soon! Your writing is addicting!

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by blastwizard03/14/16

Your mind is a wonderous thing!!!!

Agony is interesting, but then again all of the Varcolac are very, very interesting. Agony has an inner beast.., how about that?! Wonder if Kothari has an inner beast that is not Agony? Ha! Maybe instead of 2 or 4 that make up the being that is Kothi/Agony/Vampire/Panther..., maybe with the introduction of his mate and apparently feeling responsible for a child will create an altogether different being. Maybe, possibly after he stops running and takes care of the "Great Evil" that is coming..., and learns to interact with "All" that he is..., besides a "Sarcasticly Funny Fantastic Killing Machine"..., we will figure out how and why the Varcolac have such varing powers. Are their powers still developing and will mature into something else? This is awesome stuff!! As you know I can make up all kinds of scenarios with your work. Lol - it's just that good and intriguing. I could spin and spin and not be mad if I am dead wrong. Everything you have created I enjoy. So I will wait patiently (impatiently) for another chapter. Thanks so much for this.
Annnnnd, who would be Dara's mate? Hmmmmm. What about if or when Rhianna and Caleb meet Mila and Dante? What if the Queen has to make an appearance? Where are Kothi's parents? Will Kothi's new family be the trigger that possibly shows us that his human mate maybe more than meets the eye? There is a Battle Royale brewing....., this is just a fascinating blip in the World of JazCullen. I CANNOT WAIT!!!!!!

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by Anonymous03/17/16

So excited for the next chapter!

Amazing!!!!

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by FrenchFries03/18/16

MORE

This is really well done, I just spent my spring break reading everything you've written, and I end up here. Thank you for writhing these stories, they're amazing.

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by Anonymous03/22/16

Finally caught up!!!

I haven't seen any story updates on wattpad, so I get to this site and had a WHOLE three chapters to binge on 🙆🏾. In the beginning I wasn't sure if this story because Agony is....a bit much for me, but I never doubted your talent.
Thanks,
SimplyJeigh

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by Anonymous03/25/16

Bravo!! I just caught up and I am so excited to read some more!

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by Anonymous03/25/16

Roxanne Green, not logged in....

After nearly a year hiatus from reading your stories (in order to cut down ony frustration of cliffies), I am once again entralled and enraptured by your storytelling abilities, my dear Jaz. So much so, it is now 5:30 am and I have yet to sleep since restarting in chapter 12 of Tears around 5:30 yesterday evening (I took a couple breaks, but have been going strong since about 1 thus morning).... I can emphasize my closing point enough.... UPDATE SOON PLEASE, luv!!!!

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by Anonymous03/26/16

I GET THAT YOU HAVE A LIFE BUT.......

You are killing us with the waiting. I need to know if is a weekly , fortnightly, or monthly update cause I check every week and nothing. You're killing meeeeeee :'(

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by FriskyFknKitten03/31/16

I have a problem..

I keep checking for updates and alas, nothing.. it is only a compliment to your writing that we are all waiting so impatiently! I can't wait for the rest of this story to play out!

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by Anonymous04/09/16

Incredible chapter. You have a real talent for taking the plot forward and weaving amazing detail in the story. So much happens in only 2 pages and a bit, but how vivid!

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by mike271004/13/16

Wen is the next chapter posting ?

Please I am going crazy I need my fix (:
Need I say more.
Mike from Texas

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by Anonymous04/22/16

waiting

... jaz ... where is the next installment ... where .... cuz i need to know ...

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by Anonymous04/23/16

Waiting is gettin....OLD :/

I dropped all other stories while waiting Sos to be updated. My favorite writer and all that. Bought FTI in iBooks as gift to friend.
Keeping sane by reading "Running with Wolves"
by BlueWolfDancer4454'
New concept to w\wolves!

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by Anonymous04/30/16

2 Months, where's the next chapter?

Sorry to bug this is an amazing story so far, 2 months??? Better be a 10 page chapter :)

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by Markamycole05/03/16

Fantastic

Your stories are beyond great. The soul you show in characters shines through. Thank you for the wonderful journey

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by FriskyFknKitten05/05/16

I'm glad I'm not alone in my addiction..

I'm so glad I'm not alone in checking back every day for my fix. That being said, I really hope our beloved Jaz is ok!!

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by Anonymous05/09/16

Dissociative

By having different names for the three distinctive parts of himself, it would appear that Kothari/Agony/panter has compartmentalized his 3 selves so far apart that no wonder he is afraid. I don't understand why the pack or at the very least his parents and Anakatrine didn't sense that. I understand that the Varcolac were underestimated and not really given a chance tolet loose and test their limits, but the total isolation of Agony from the others including the other hybrids seems a bit far fetched.
However, in a way I am glad he was finally able to really let loose and even though it is disturbing, he now knows that at least Data accepts him, all of him even though he scares her witless. Now that he knows that the human girl is his mate he won't lose so much control of his vampiric side.
It still makes me wonder what happened when he was so young that he felt he had to hide Agony from everyone...all the Varcolac seem to have a control issue in one form or another and some with more.
This story sure got very exciting.
I wonder if Kallum's mate is going to be the very strong female Alpha of the decimated pack, interestingly enough this is also Fox's pack too.
I think I see a merging of this European pack and the mated Varcolacs.

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by coffinbait05/11/16

I'm still here.

I have read all your stories starting from the very beginning and waiting on Storm Of Shadows to continue is killing me! please let me know as soon as possible when you will be continuing your story because I'm dying of waiting here! can you please let me know when the next chapter will be posted even if it's not right away just so I have some idea? thanks!

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by Anonymous05/16/16

Checking.......

The wait is killing me and I think Storm of Shadows is my favorite of all. I find Kothari very fascinating I cant wait to see how he interacts with his human mate!

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by KiwiKing05/19/16

O.M.G

I havent been here for prob about a year or more. But to come and find this story....already at chap 6....my day instantly looked brighter. Go Kothi! Go Dara! YAY Joshua...gotta love them all.

Will also look for FTI in my local bookstore...YAY

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by Anonymous05/28/16

Really like your stories

Please continue soon, also I'm at a loss he was going to kill the wolf not the human. And he said he almost killed his mate so the wolf is his mate not the human?

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by clarketoni06/01/16

Please come back to us

Loving all of your stories but the waiting is killing me its been a long wait for the next chapter fingers crossed it will be soon. Pretty pretty please

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by Anonymous06/10/16

Found story line because of this chapter...

...so, had to back up, found first book on Amazon Prime and have read all stories straight through. Have two weeks of tv saved or deleted. Glad we hit the between season dull drums. Actually happy I got sick this past week so I could read and not work. :( That's just so wrong, being a responsible adult and all. Handed this story line to my book club that only reads online authors. They're still at book 1-3, but since we're RL BF, talking about mutual tv shows, and girls night, has been put on hold, because of this series, so we have like 6 hours of show and dinner time backed up.
Next chapters would be lovely before the Olympics start, though I suppose could read during boring sports...maybe I'll just cancel watching summer shows...depending on how fast you submit to end of book. Wished I had found at end of this book. GAWD! Long winded for THIS SERIES ROCKS, but painfully slow with submissions. Cruel and devious punishment!

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by Anonymous06/13/16

Jaz pls

Is been so long, is everything alright we need more pls more more

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by Anonymous06/15/16

Best stories ever

I discovered this series right before my mom had surgery for a brain tumor. It has been so wonderful to read these while sitting with her as she recuperates-really keeps my mind occupied. Can't wait for the next ones. Thanks for your wonderful engaging story telling!!!

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