Storm of Shadows Ch. 06

Awesome

Well as worth the wait.

Great as always

Jaz you are a writer par excellence. Some more please

speechless

Thank you for the awesome chapter. Your writing never fails to move me..

Awesomeness

That was great.

Intense!!!!!

Thanks !

Please Continue! I Cannot Get Enough!

This story from the very beginning has held me captive. I search daily for updates and next chapters. LOVE IT!!!!

Thank you so much for sharing!

Ugh I wanted Dara to be his mate, not some rando human

You keep improving - very strong chapter!

Truly captivating

Thank you, I have enjoyed your stories and because of you and a few others and motivated to start writing in this specific genre myself....Wonder!!!

Silly peeps

Fox is Dara's mate

Wow Jaz! That was a blockbuster chapter and a half!!! *****

I just love the way you do this: You have done this all through this saga of yours -you sort of bubble along for a few chapters, picking up a few trails and wisps of plot and story here and there, mixing the plot together like magic (and writing beautifully!), setting it all off into the air with a gentle, or not so gentle *pooofff*... and then, KAPBOOMB!! you hit us with the big stuff. There, you got us! And I thank you for it!

I love your writing; this story you've been weaving (obviously going from the first instalment with Rihanna and Caleb, to this) for so long now!.

You've picked up so many fans along that way, does anyone really think about whether there's any sex in the story anymore? We just want your brilliant storytelling!

Well that's what I want anyways,,,

Flissxx

And yes of course, Fox is Dara's mate, duh!!

that was foretold within the last few chapters.... :)

Unless of course, Jaz decides to rewrite it, but I don't think so ;) xx

OMG!

*faints* *wakes up* *faints again* WHEW that was amazing! Can't wait for more!

You're simply the best!!!

This series is the best of them all. I love Kothi!! I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter....

Awesome!

I look forward to the next installment,I even liked the cliffie at the end and you know how I feel about cliffie, Jazzy. lol

Jazcullen vs Etaski

Really u're a great writer with such cool character build up , Wished Kothi's become fully in control. Agony just like Shyntre in the Etaski's series. Great story

Magnifico !!!!!!!!!!!

Need more! Need more!!!!!

Fox is Dara's mate???

How do you know? Did I miss something?
Because of his attraction to her sister?

Loving this!

Amazing. I will wait for the next installment but it won't be with much patience.

NOOOOOOO

DONT DO THIS TO ME AGAIN JAZ. MY HEART CANT TAKE IT :'(

SOOO EXCITED!!!

I love this world you've created! I have read all the books in this series a few times now and am so excited you are still posting! I always think you've created my favorite character or couple and then you do another.. although I really do love Freya's character probably most. I speculate that Fox must be Daras mate.. Elijah is the master?? the female alpha is maybe Kallums mate? I'd love to see Louis taken down by a female wolf.. so many possibilities! Please keep writing! I'm excited to see where this story goes next.. and i cant wait for Kothi to find some peace and happiness.

Ughhhhh!

No! He has to come back and save the mother!

Love, love love this story!

You are back!

You never fail to amaze me with your writing... I anxiously await your next update.

I can't even begin to explain how excited I was to see a new chapter, I honestly did a double take I was that surprised and happy. Thank you!

Wow!

Excellent update!! A couple of errors, but I am happy to forgive them for the story!! (Kick your editor in the shin!) Please do not have us wait as long. I am excited about the turn. Not sure I expected all of this!

BAAAASAAAM!!!!!!

My girl is back!!!! Wow!! What a ride THIS one has been!!
You milady are a MASTER storyteller!! Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us!! Buuuut.......Jaz darling, puuulease don't make us wait so blasted loooong!!
I'm almost as tortured as poor Kothi!!!
Lmbo

cliffhanger

Omg!!!!!!!! I can honestly say that this story is off the hook.....damn

just insane with this!

and she does it again..another monster installation!
I troll lit erotica everyday 4 Jaz installments..
But kothari really looks weak without agony..once again running away when he's in control..

I CANNOT DEAL!!

Super installment as always!!

Oh no! Kothi, no! What a beautiful, screwed up, tortured soul!

Jeez!!!

Jaz and her cliffhangers. Sometimes, I wish I stumbled across your stories a few years from now. That way, I wouldn't have to wait for the updates. Thank you so much for your stories, they are among the best I've read. KUDOS

Awesome!

I thought Dara is kothi's mate but things are getting confused..

Oh Wow

Love this chapter once again. Could it be he has two mates? One for vamp one for his panther . That would be so cool.

Yes!

Update on my birthday! :) yeah! Love it!

Loving this storyline!!! Keep them coming!!!

Oh no poor Kothi!

Hope he forgives himself. Agony will be back..... So amazing as always, loved it!

WOW

just wow!

Five stars are not enough to rate this.

Another amazing instalment. You draw us in so well and then leave us hanging at the end of the chapter :-) Loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

FIRST MEETING WITH HIS MATE COULD VE BEEN BETTER

HAVE SOME FIRY DIALOGUES BETWEEN KOTHI AND HIS MATE

Wow, wow wooooooow

Great update. Except, I get that Kothi's head is in a weird space but the first meeting with his mate was a bit off. Could've been better. The fight scene blew me away though. Dara blew me away. She's cool. Kothari though, staking a vampire down with a bone! This scene beat the the fight scene in The Council and When World's Collide. The only one that could one up Kothari with regards to dramatic effect would be Anakatrine

Beautiful as always!

Beautiful as it is, it is becoming a bit confusing. Thought Dara was Kothi's mate all along! Or maybe Agony is Dara's mate...... Keep writing! You are a great writer.

Who is his mate?

am a bit confused, is it the girl or the mother?

Amazing

Loving this part of the series, but am very curious as to who is Dara's mate. I have been thinking that it could be Fox, but you never fail to surprise me, so as usual I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. NEVER STOP WRITING PLEASE!

Heart broken;-(

I was hoping dara would be kothari's mate because i wanted to see what kind of child they would have since this is the only chance to have two different were hybrids mating well am sure you would have something to console my broken heart

I'm not confused.

I saw some of the other comments from readers who are getting confused about Kothari's mate. I have read all the stories and I remember the similarities with Dara's twin, the difference with the mating bond vs that of the wolves & vamps is the tri-personality of the Varcolac. Makes sense to me that all 3 would need to agree on their mate. I'm loving it! Not the same old stuff! Plus I have faith that you will have just the perfect mate for Dara. :)

WOW! Wonderful writing!

Almost wrote "Wonderful writing as usual", but it's even better!

Love the twist where the attack on his mate drives Agony so crazy he almost ends up killing his mate!

I don't see Kothari as weak, just ashamed and terrified of his monster side, which is totally understandable.

I love that you don't feel obliged to throw in gratuitous sex scenes just because it's literotica and you do them so well.

Please keep the chapters coming, but don't feel pressured to rush them. I only have withdrawal symptoms for about a week after each chapter, so you might as well take the time to keep producing masterpieces.

Just make sure you stay healthy so you can keep writing!

P.S.: you've done a great job with Kothari's mate confusion. I had no trouble following along as you revealed his fixation on Dara as a crush rather than a mate bond. A pity Kothi's confusion seems to have been contagious to some readers :-) .

Desperately awaiting the continuation!

I absolutely love the world you've created. I've read through the entire series several times now. My favorites being the Council and Tears. While there are definitely discrepancies in time line and some story details, what you truly excel at is creating characters and relationships that it's impossible not to care about. Not just the romantic ones either, but the sibling, friendships, and parental relationships as well. I'm eager to see how Kallum will take his rightful place as alpha of the Varcolac and their mates, Dara meeting her mate (who I assume is Fox), how Karn will break through Elina's defenses, what will happen to Gard and Rayne... Please don't keep us waiting too long! I greatly appreciate the time you take to write for us, please keep up the good work!

Ok.....

I started this saga somewhere in the middle. I have been reading for weeks. Now I am going to have to go back and start at the beginning. More weeks of reading I'm sure. You know, its funny, my most common complaint on this site is that the stories are to short. Hah! Guess you showed me! Love it! 5*s