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I like where this is going, just hope you actually finish this unlike some authors that have written a story about genies
Keep Going, Please!
I read Joe Brolly's entire series and loved it. Also the others who started but stopped. As Anonymous said, please keep going, don't tease us like so many others before. You also have a romantic feel going that Joe didn't have, and I really want to see how this turns out.
very interesting!
I enjoyed this setup and am looking forward to more. thank you for sharing
Very . . .
. . .nice, Thank you!
very nice start
You chose to feature one of the most beautiful and difficult to play trumpet solos written. It kept playing in my head as I was reading.
nice lead in
Definitely a beautiful musical piece to accompany the story.
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