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Tedious Trend
It's the wife?!!! Holy crap, what a surprise ending!!! I never saw coming!!!!!!
Jesus, can you guys either stop with these lame stories where the wife isn't really cheating or at least try to make them more interesting and less transparent.
5 star
That anonymous fellow can go fuck himself.
Nice
Easy to figure out but always nice when a loving husband and wife decide to play amongst themselves.
very good NO excellent
most would only dream of this... few would do... thanks
A good story...
A good story...A story about a couple that keep their fantasies between them it's always a good LW story...3*
Great s
When I thought she was heating I was gong to give you 5 stars, but to find out they're married...well done! I didn't see it coming and you painted a phenomenol picture.
Very well done!
Exciting
Well written but predictable. A refreshing way to keep a marriage vibrant & have variance. Your plot comes from a often used template but your writing style & imagery sets your story apart to be worthy of note. Kudos!
While this variation of LW story may be emerging as more and more commonplace...
I think your version was very well done. Congratulations and Thanks!
lovely written
very erotic, thanks
This same theme has popped up a lot lately
Not badly done but certainly no surprise that she turns out to be playing a game with her husband. Maybe because it's been done a lot lately is what made this ho hum. Not particularly sexy or erotic. Boring.
Good Job
Very enjoyable take on the theme. Well done first effort here. Looking forward to more of your submissions
Thankfully not a WACC story.
While predictable it was good. On to playing games at a bar...
I agree
Nice
we need more of this kind of story in LW
and less of the cum guzzling cucky, wannabe faggot kind
If its this exciting for her to pretend she is being a stranger's slut, . . .
then how much more exciting would the real thing be? Eventually she will want to find out. To role play adultery for the excitement makes about as much sense to role play rape, or murder, for the excitement. All bad actions start out as bad ideas.
Been done before but...
always fun to do it again, like riding a roller coaster, catching that big bass, can't get enough of it. Well written, quite erotic.
Five, of course.
Jedd Clampett
Crap
Sheer unadulterated crap. No *
Well executed
I guessed the plot in the first few lines but the heat of the encounter was devastating.
Got me!
I'm usually pretty good at deriving end results well before the end of the story. Well done! At what seemed like another wife gone astray, ended up with yet another of my own fantasies coming true.
Thank you, Lancerlott!
Absolutely predictable
mostly because it has been done (overdone?)before.
Bravo...
Impressive beginning. It was inevitable that your passion would play out exactly as it did. I trust there are many more stories lurking about? Wonderful!!!!!!!
Terrific story!
So sexy and very well written. Loved the ending!
Good Read***
Thanks for sharing.
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