Incest is Hot

Yawn!

Typical young man with a gigantic cock. Quick read tho as my interest was lost in two sentences ... I think.

Get real.

For once I would like a truer story

I read this site from time to time
And I am sorry not everyone is 8 inches plus
For once right in true life

Get an Editor and learn human anatomy, kid.

Yeah, you need to learn how to edit. How a story flows. It's clear this is your fantasy, and that is fine.
Still, learn about human anatomy. You're not gonna bust through someone's womb into their stomach, nor can you see your dick, no matter how large it supposedly is for you in this story.
Research kid. Do it.

Uh huh

As big as a can of hairspray? ..... Would that be the regular size or the economy size or maybe even the jumbo size? More information needed here before this story has any credibility ..... oh wait! It already doesn't have any of that.

Pathetic

So...is it Jillian or Veronica? Not a very good story.

Total Garbage.

He is ten inches soft, thirteen hard?
She has 34DD tits?
Asked how he gets it into a girl he says "Well it takes a lot of lube, but it usually goes in eventually."
He fucked a girl for three hours non-stop, and then fucked his sister so that he could see his cock moving under her skin above her belly button?
She came when the head of his cock had only been inside her for a second?
And then she had four hours of "brutal non-stop orgasms" until she passed out?
What a complete load of total garbage.
I know this is a site dedicated to erotic fiction, but there's no need to make it so obviously a fairy tale.
Go away and come back when you can write readable, plausible stories, not just your juvenile wish list. You give amateur erotica a bad name.
Oh, and by the way, you seem to have the same character named both Jillian and Veronica.

Get "real".

There's fiction.. and then there's fiction. This is bullshit.

Exaggeration

The story would have been better with 9" and a little more. Four hours of hard fucking. I little stretch. Should have made it longer.

Incest is Hot, too bad...

Incest is Hot, too bad this story is not.

So sorry

First time i wrote a negative comment. Dude 13 inch?? 3 hours fucking? Make it more realistic i think.

So bad it's funny

Something like this should be in the sci-fi category.

great story....

Good job i hope she ends up pregnant

You positive you're

over 18??
You write like a school kid!!
Complete BS!!

Worst, Stupid

This is unrealistic and poorly written. You know where to put that 13
Incher

go and have a wank||||

Go sit in the corner and wank yourself off. So you can dream up another unbelievable story

Ok kid

Here's a hint, nobody wants to hear you pat yourself on the back for having a big dick,even if you really have a big dick.

Wow!

This can only be a bad parody of porn! I am astounded that it is not mentioned at the beginning as a warning, like, Beware: You'll be astounded and cum from laughing so hard!

This is atrocious

As I said this is truly awful. But hey on the plus side this story is so bad that if you write another story surely it can only get better.

Totally bull-shit

This is not even a little bit believable.You are really in a dream world.5

What a Load of CRAP

If it was your idea to write the most unbelievable bunch of Crap,To get a rise out of people!
Well you Succeeded #BigTime!
If Not & you thought story was good idea Well then your just a Moron!!!!!!!
Worst Story I've ever read #Ever

Who added this to there favourites?

Thus far, 33 people have added this to their favourites. Come on, own up. Who are you? More interestingly, tell me what it is about this story that you liked so much that promoted you to add it to your favourite list -- I'm intrigued to know.

I stopped reading before the end of the first paragraph.

I don't know if the story is good or if it sucks, As soon as you mentioned having a 13" cock, I quit. I have no use in a story like that.

honestly sucks

honestly it sucks, really 13. be more realistc. i just stop reading

some problems

I rarely write negative comments but if a cock were pushed into a woman's womb, she would be in severe pain and would not be orgasming. That's just a fact.
I usually do not comment anonymously but I don't want to get into a silly feud with anyone over this. You need to come back to reality.

13"?

That was it for me, I knew it was fucked up from there so I stopped reading.

13 inches really no one would believe that mess

Total waste of time 5-7 inches is a nice story and way more be leave able this was a poor story by some one who is not comfortable will real life sizes I have never had any complaints and I am only 6 inches so try being more real on the storys

ok

just a little far fetched

you changed her name to jillian when its veronica. the size was a to far fetched and too quick of pace. nothing to lead up to a hot encounter...good try but put some effort into it next time and make it believable

1 out of 28.....

I person in the comments, said they liked it. Out of 28, well make that 29 now. 13" really? 34DD ok believable. 13" not. I gave you a 1 star, only because, they don't have a negative rating system also. So I will provide my own......... -3. -1 for 13", -1, for 3 hours straight, and he has only banged 6 girls, -1 for utter bullshit.

Very realistic

You're my kind of man. I'm just a little bigger than you. I'm 41" long, yes forty one inches. My cock is as thick as a salad bowl. The head is the size of a cantaloupe. I'm doing life without the possibility of parole for multiple "fuckacides". I'm awaiting another trial for forcing the judge's brain out of her eye sockets while fucking her. But not to worry. My dick has magical powers.

size of a can

Pushing thru a cervix opening isn't that easy, i've tried it before.

ok so my comment isn't too negative but

Yeah I kinda agree that it's too far fetched but after all it is just a story . It's all suppose to be fantasy

Holy Shit!

There's over compensating, then there's this guy.
Fuck me, try a little harder next time dude XD

1

Faxmachine34 is a douchebag.

proportions are important

My guess is that his balls are grapefruit as well? Or pumellos?

fast n fancy but...

Is Veronicas name also Jillian?

Story

Is there a story aniwere here??.

nice and perfectly right to the point. loved it

A clear 2

Neither funny nor arrousing.
Just plain boring immature fantasy.

(You nearly lost me already in the first paragraph stating «girls literally get wet when I flex my biceps». Probably it was meant to be a joke, but it failed to create a smile ....)

Boring

Way too over exaggerated and unrealistic. Make it fantasy and say he's some relation of Adonis, and I might believe it.

more

please write more stories. i think its great that its straight to the point. sister's pov would be good

Not bad

Liked it but didn't feel like I was reading story and more like I was being told a story by one of my friends. Liked that it was straight to the point but was just off.