All Comments on 'Real Estate Agent'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
deja vu all over again

This story sounds extremely familiar, and not in that after-a-while-all-the-stories-on-Lit-sound-the-same way. If this is a story which was submitted earlier, then revised and resubmitted, it would be nice to acknowledge that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Keep writing, Please

There's heat, Annette has personality. Perfectly fine story. Make it a branch out period in the man's life.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I thoroughly enjoyed it

A well written short story. Nice and quick but with heaps of details

Well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
missing fire

missing the situatiion creation for pleasure, should detail the fore play.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
ok....but check your grammer and spellings

Many words are incorrect......and confusing

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