by sebbyblue
This story sounds extremely familiar, and not in that after-a-while-all-the-stories-on-Lit-sound-the-same way. If this is a story which was submitted earlier, then revised and resubmitted, it would be nice to acknowledge that.
There's heat, Annette has personality. Perfectly fine story. Make it a branch out period in the man's life.
A well written short story. Nice and quick but with heaps of details
Well done
missing the situatiion creation for pleasure, should detail the fore play.
Many words are incorrect......and confusing