All Comments on 'Spree 7'

I need a cigarette

that's a violently sexy little poem you wrote there pal. These sprees of yours together make a book--a good one. You do know that, right?

Ok one nitpick. Might be my ear, but this sounded rhythmically off enough to make me stop reading and say "huh?"--

and wrap your calm

in form of arms

around this man shape

cactus thorny

carelessly horny

overloaded oddity

I'd do this (just a suggestion....)

and wrap your calm

inform of arms

around this man shaped

cactus thorny

careless horny

overloaded oddity

(Note that I did a "Rybka" to "inform" hehe.) Anyway, you know I love these word sprees you skid onto your computer. :)

wordplay here... well done.

jim :)