Alien Subduction Ch. 01

Neat

*dark- cqtm

A great build up, but the ending sex scene was really rushed. It would be perfect if you've expanded it, like the sensations of the poor girl, how it was first uncomfortable and painful, how it gradually started to feel pleasurable, etc.

More

More please!

Great start

Wow nice start to what looks like a hot story. Ready for ch. 2!

The unfortunate fate of this series.

I'd love to make the next few chapters for this story, I had a rough idea in my head at the beginning of how each one would plan out, but I don't feel it would be fair leaving it to stop without an explanation. One of the reason I write on this site is to entertain myself as well as others. However due to my tendency to generate doubt on a project after a long time, I understand that I bit off more than I I can chew as I really struggle to write without the core enthusiasm I get when I first come up with the idea.

To put things simply, I probably won't carry on this story and likely stick to the one-offs that I can with better results. Sorry for any disappointments.

Well that's unfortunate...

This story was pretty good. You know, as far as these things go, but whatever works dude. I could tell by the end that the creative edge was beginning to fade, and so it was slightly rushed.

More Chapters

Will there be any more chapters because I really want to see and read what happens to Kylie and the rest of the female crew members on the space ship.