All Comments on 'Birthday Girl Ch. 05'

I've been following your story for a few months now and it's fantastic. Your writing is funny and relatable, and very easy to get sucked into. Great job.

More please don't stop

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Brian and Melissa relationship starts and does not stop, all the nerdy texts fitted well and led to believable characters and situations.

You are taking your time and it makes the story more romantic, as I see it there must be at least 1 chapter more and I am looking forward to it.

Wonderful, realistic storytelling. The pace is perfect, and the characters are believable. Looking forward to many more chapters as their relationship deepens.

This is the best story I've ever read on Literotica!

Another great chapter, keep up the good work my brother.

-Fellow Enthusiast

I like the pace...the story...the players...the way you write...the humor...GUESS WHAT? I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE!!!!

There's a lot of people on line that might want weigh in on that comment!

But this story is really well written and majorly engaging and for those reading this story, they want to know what happens next and are invested!

Brian and Melissa are really compelling characters and I want to know what happens to them next.

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but this GMCT is the one I want the recipe for. Sounds orgasmic. So...please? Good read, too. Thanks.

I love the banter and the playfulness of the characters. Can't wait to keep reading.