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Roses and a Stranger

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by Anonymous02/02/16

Fun story ...

It's a fun story and well-written, but it presents some problems with pronouns: "she" can be either the wife or the visitor in several moments of the story and it's distracting. Still, we enjoyed it a lot.

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